Dear Sir,
I am Shwatank, the father of Susan, who is a ninth-standard student in your school. I am writings this letter to let you know that, as you are exploring parents, who could accompany students on the international trip to India, I would like to nominate myself.
There are two main reasons that are strong enough to prove my eligibility for this task. Firstly, I am a native Indian speaker, I can easily act as a translator between children and the Indian people. This would be easy for schoolchildren while their stay in India. In addition, I have spent my childhood in India, I can take kids around and show them places of their interests.
Moreover, I am aware of Indian cultures and traditions. Thus, I will make sure that each student gets involved in the local activities and learn the culture.
Plus, chiefly, I would also ensure their safety and security, along with this I would make this sure that they have adequate sleep and a healthy diet on their entire vacation.
Finally, if you concur with this application, I would like to get some basic information from you like the number of students traveling, the departure date, and the agenda of travel.
I am hoping to receive a positive response from you.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69863013699 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54426830816 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 219.0 16.3608247423 1339% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1029.0 76.5299724578 1345% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 219.0 16.8248392259 1302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 83.0 4.34317383033 1911% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166438626975 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166438626975 0.0766984524023 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824089695434 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761191438226 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 110.2 8.37731958763 1315% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -142.35 70.7449484536 -201% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 87.5 7.45979381443 1173% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.46 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.1 7.59969072165 238% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 89.6 8.54432989691 1049% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 90.0 8.15463917526 1104% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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