Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for their study?
These days, many graduated high school students choose to take a year before heading to university to travel or work. For many people, this is one of the best ways to experience new things and take a rest before a 4-year study. However, there can be both pros and cons for deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss why it is either necessary or bad to take a gap year before starting to study at a higher level of study compared to high school.
Positively, let’s begin by looking at the benefits. For many students, traveling to another country is a great way to broaden your mind and learn a new culture, make some new friends, or just simply take a break somewhere else. On the other hand, students choose to work for a small business for a period of time, it can be at the convenience store, at the fast-food restaurant, at the mall as a counter, or launching a small business. There are various ways for a gap-year student to make a small amount of money, to gain experience, and learn how to manage money for the first year in another independent atmosphere.
There are a few drawback issues for these approaches. First, the finance problem, not every family is able to afford their children to travel to another country. Secondly, this may lead to another negative way of work before taking lessons in university: work may deter you from going back to study, accidentally stuck on that work because of many unexpected problems. So, the most effective way to take a gap year peacefully is that you should make a plan for every activity you will do in your gap year
In conclusion, having a gap year before university always has its pros and cons. But in my own opinion, these are really necessary for anyone, but risks always go along with it, so you must do everything properly and carefully in order to avoid bad causes and it will valuably be worth it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...oose to work for a small business for a period of time, it can be at the convenience store, at...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to travel to another country. Secondly, this may lead to another negative way of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54117647059 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50352692393 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7467040016 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230257236252 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823382946921 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357945049321 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134205083701 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389376891617 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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