In this modern society, students are exposed to myriads of opportunities in their further education. Some of them have a preference for taking a gap year after graduation from high school either for working purposes or traveling hither and thither. This essay will discuss whether the merits can overshadow the demerits.
It is apparent that university is not the mere route to success when there are a plethora of other paths including taking a year off after high school. As a matter of fact, seeking jobs to gain work experience is proved to be conducive to one's career rather than assimilating mundane theoretical knowledge at university, which is virtually inapplicable in real life. Besides, soft skills play a crucial part in the development of students in a long run. However, this set of skills requires a working environment to hone. Therefore, if students aspire to become competent workers with not only a colossal amount of working experience but also enhanced social skills, taking a gap year will be an indeed wise option.
Nevertheless, a year off without acquiring university fundamental knowledge of multiple realms may cause an escalating number of problems to arise in a student's future career. It is irrefutable that these theories at university set a firm foundation for their growth. Students would find it harder for them to proceed with their educational path if they spent an entire year working continuously with a view to attaining experience at work. Hence, being incapable of comprehending abstruse lectures at university is bound to be inevitable.
In a nutshell, the benefits of taking a gap year after high school do outstrip the drawbacks. Students should take all factors into account before reaching the final decision to take it.
- Some students prefer to take a gap year and between high school university to work or to travel Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90921667579 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9330830621 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364855504987 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112470479481 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862403231538 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22453255623 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631786389216 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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