There is no doubt that it is a debatable issue whether supporting by fiance to grey haired people is a justify or not. While some individuals of the society opine that government has to pay primary duties where it can utilize their budget I also argue that the grey hair should take their pension age responsibilities on their own shoulders.
To commence with, the predominant reason behind the commercial should support to elderly people, these people not only paid hefty amount of taxes while working age but also dedicate their entire life which helpful for the holistic development of the country. To elucidate it, if older people pay to the government , organisation will return to them as a pension. However, if government allocate major amount of budget to support the grey hair , it will unable to mange their primary responsibilities such as infrastructure ,medicare facilities and education which can play indispensable role in the holistic development of the nation. Since a large amount of fund to be needed in order to provide these facilities, therefore, burden would be inclined on the shoulders of the govt. as a result, developing nation will unable to sustain their economy growth.
In addition to the economic factors, government will not able to offer such pension or other benefits to public unless individuals save money for their crisis days, if people become saving oriented then they will not depend on the govt for their livings last days. Last but not least, young generation should take responsibilities of their parents in their old age owing to they spend huge chunks of money on their childhood in order to complete their demands. For example, In France, youth had better take care of their parents, otherwise, rulling government will defiantly charge from their income for their parents nursing.
In conclusion, given aforementioned information , I would conclude that although grey hair people is the responsibility of the government , they have to pay parmary responsibility which play vital role in the holistic development of the nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18452380952 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90403013129 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6291540635 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.363636364 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148251269734 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609594231465 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385878048545 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099083077248 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332833757396 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.