Some think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, it is believed by some masses that both the genders have numerous distinct qualities and they get different job opportunities.Here,i would like to discord with the given statement.
Manifold points are there to support my opinion.first and foremost, modern woman did a fantastic job in every field such as science, political, teaching and other profession. Therefore, it is a unjustifiable with them if they do not get position in all areas.apart from it, many men and women can be deprived if they don't get job according to their own choice. For example, many males like to do kitchen activities and they wants to make their profession in this feild but it is said that kitchen is better for women. Thus, the idea of different jobs to both the gender does not fully holds the water.
numerous points can be mentioned. this idea is not lucrative for those women who wants to job in
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89024390244 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8880304378 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1456565348 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244594955484 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874397731705 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648744120488 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150388272095 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292346066582 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.