Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, company and society. Discuss and give opinion
Many people argue that workers shouldn’t change their work. Others, however, hold that it should be considered as numerous benefits it can bring for themselves, the organization, and society. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and show why I am in favor of the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some believe that changing jobs shouldn’t be taken into account. Their rationale is that if people decide to change their job, it may affect their financial status as they no longer have a sustainable amount of money from their annual salary. As a result, employees may be under pressure since they could not afford to pay their annual tax as well as daily bills. However, changing jobs does not always bring some negative impacts on workers. Some people make a decision to switch their working conditions because they find a suitable job with a better salary. On top of that, it will be easier for them to get a promotion.
On the other hand, I am convinced that employees can gain uncountable benefits if they change their working environment. One reason is that workers can improve their ability as their knowledge and experience are developed. Take managers, for example, their capability such as communication, managing, controlling, and planning is gained through a great deal of time and experience which can only happen when they change their working environment. Secondly, employees who changed their job often contribute more to their company as well as society as they are able to solve many difficult tasks which require specific experiences. As a result, it will be inevitable for them to get a better salary or a promotion.
In conclusion, there are good reasons to believe that there are some opinions against the consideration of changing job. Therefore, it is my view that changing working conditions may help employees to have a better future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99683544304 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78373648751 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0297408051 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303760998071 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990219593039 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513990642156 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17460880704 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453151020851 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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