Online education is a comparatively new trend and has skyrocketed these days, thus, thousands of educational institutes have already embraced this method to offer their courses. Personally, despite a number of inconveniences, distance learning should be considered as a welcome development.
Distance learning has gained tremendous popularity in recent years due to its comfort and convenience . One of the key point in favor of this studying method is the flexibility that allows an individual to accomplish their tasks at their own pace from anywhere, at any time without firmly adhering to lecturers' rigorous and intuitive lessons. This situation, therefore, results in the effectiveness of studying and educational outcomes improvement . Moreover, not only does online courses enable youngsters to get access to a wide variety of skills and knowledge but also adults and even the elderly. For example, thousands of people such as stay-at-home moms, and seniors have been drawn to this trend to further their education and consolidate their understanding of preferred areas of study.
Notwithstanding, besides these aforementioned benefits, the adverse impacts of internet-based education should not be overlooked. Initially, the primary demerit of this phenomenon is the lack of direct interaction between students as they are restricted to chatting via online platforms in lieu of having a chance of being engaged in face-to-face conversations. As a result, these students would hardly intensify their soft skills such as communication or teamwork skills that are vitally integral to their future prospects. Secondly, studying through the Internet may have a detrimental impact on pupils' study. For the reason that children are easily distracted by numerous factors such as social media, which is far more luring than their monotonous lessons and can not get a clear perspective of their knowledge.
To sum up, I believe that online courses are an optimal form of learning and a step toward revolutionizing the educational system in a way that has been unprecedented
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55835962145 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22688865762 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621451104101 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5181684344 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214501176744 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664446019506 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362433840317 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115860725692 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379743926903 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.