Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Most of the youth are likely to move out of their hometown on the completion of college, on the other hand, others feel comfortable in staying in their hometown till death. Both of them have their merits and demerits, as most of the small towns have limited access to good universities, while, leaving a hometown pressurises the one to leave their neighbours. In my opinion, leaving hometown for better opportunities is the better option rather than staying in the hometown with reduced opportunities.
In fact, it is unacceptable for any individual to leave their hometown. However, Certain obstacles force them to move out of hometown and settle in cities for further benefits.
Young people travel from hometown to join the desired university to continue their studies, On the other hand, Some adults are in search of entrepreneur opportunities and move to cities to have more scope. For instance, Many entrepreneurs work like zomato, swiggy, rapido have a skyrocketing market in cities, while, many towns do not prefer these.
In contrast, many people like to spend their life with relatives, neighbours, and close ones whom they are living with for many years. Moreover, In their view, relations and the way we live is more important than earning staying miles away from loved ones.
To illustrate, Although many youth in India are likely to migrate out of India for a better lifestyle, others argue that staying in the place they are born in gives them more happiness.
In my opinion, Life must not be stuck in our hometown itself, it must be accelerated their career and the one must explore every place.
To conclude, although some people go away from hometown to accelerate their career, others are likely to stay in their hometown and live with their family. In my opinion, the hometown must be a part of life but not our entire life, so keep going and explore despite staying in one place.
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- Diagram 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'many youths'.
Suggestion: many youths
...m loved ones. To illustrate, Although many youth in India are likely to migrate out of I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98757763975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61312290693 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487577639752 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9552545762 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.538461538 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36475592569 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147895536099 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957917089373 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180778397146 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815736811043 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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