Nowadays, deciding where to live when they become adults is becoming a debatable topic among people all over the world. Many young people decide that it's worthy to leave their hometowns as soon as they turn eighteen. In contrast, some people prefer to stay in their hometowns and spend the rest of their life. This essay will discuss why people living in their hometown is important but why migrating to other towns is much more advantageous.
Some people wish to live in the same environment in which they grew up and want to live in it forever. People feel comfortable in doing their things and even trying new things as they have a huge knowledge of local practices and customs. Besides, a person can make strong relationships with the people in their society as they have been living over there since their childhood. For example, a survey made on the life expectancy of people claimed that people who remain to stay in their hometowns throughout their life have better chances of living more years.
On the other hand, people nowadays get easily bored to see or do the same things in their daily routine and believe that it is necessary to move out of their hometowns for improved living. First of all, they can enhance their adaptability nature as they have to go through various issues when they move out of their own city. And also get the ability to cope with challenging situations as they come across through people with different lifestyles.
To sum up, some people find that it is obvious to leave their hometowns for their best, whereas others who dislike this tend to live in their hometowns. This essay discussed why people living in their hometowns are worthy but why moving out of their towns is more efficient. In my opinion, it will make people's life much interesting and productive if they leave their hometowns and adapt to live in other towns rather than aiming to give the best by living in the same neighborhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other towns is much more advantageous. Some people wish to live in the same env...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, whereas, for example, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74926253687 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39473888414 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501474926254 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2053751488 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.580902991009 0.244688304435 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236305988942 0.084324248473 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846117648511 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397001420108 0.151304729494 262% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803418154377 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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