Nowadays people's views about the environment have become a popular debatable topic. Few people believe that the extinction of species, especially rare ones as a major threat to the environment in the present time, while some people disagree with this and argue that there are more crucial environmental issues. This essay will discuss why people think that dying out of species is a major problem but why people think that there are more environmental threats that are important to be addressed first.
People always have an opinion that the loss of rare species of plants and animals should be considered as a severe threat to nature. Because in this ecosystem everything within it is dependent on others, as a result, if one part of the ecosystem is facing problems then sooner or later the things that are dependent on it will suffer. For instance, some plant species like Tulasi and Ginkgo are used to treat patients who suffer from anxiety and depression. All in all, preventing various kinds of species from dying out should also be addressed.
On the other hand, some people feel that many issues are harmful to the environment in the present time other than the extinction of plants and animals species. In the current time, global warming is a challenging problem for which most people across the world are suffering and facing the worst consequences. Measures should be taken to prevent further issues. For example, unseasonal rainfalls and increasing temperatures all over the world are due to global warming. Thus, many issues must be given attention and steps to be taken to eradicate those threats.
People these days are experiencing the consequences of different environmental problems. This essay discussed why people think saving species is necessary but why it is very crucial to understand other environmental threats. In my opinion, protecting rare species is a secondary thing to be done but focussing on much more acute problems to protect our nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g on much more acute problems to protect our nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68694254474 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518181818182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1684837188 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294449234316 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921429241215 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667757758246 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18113406971 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580025975781 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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