Nowadays it becomes more and more popular to take a "gap year" whatever your age is, but some people complain about the negative effect. We will look at the different aspects of year travelling and argue if it can be both beneficial and cause problems.
There are certainly several benefits to take a year of travel. Firstly, it teaches responsibility. Due to the fact that it is usually taken by school graduates, a year of being separated from home typically makes them mature and reliable. As a result, they study and work much better.
Secondly, travelling helps to make new friends and checks old ones. For instance, a person meets new people and makes new connections with them, which can last for the whole life. He also discovers if his/her friends are true, so he/she can rely on them. As a result, relationships develop.
That said, there are also some disadvantages to travel for all year. First of all, it is always expensive. To travel for a long time person have to have a large amount of money. It is not always possible to earn them "on place", so it can be a real problem. Another example of drawback is the possibility of thinking that "gap year" is too interesting, so there can be no desire to end it and back home to the work or formal education.
Therefore, I strongly believe that travelling for one year can drastically change lives and it is largely beneficial, but only if done with controls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t becomes more and more popular to take a 'gap year' whatever your age ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79761904762 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76542320589 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.293099295 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5625 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196505716249 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627696121952 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543328925367 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109591287564 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410819384844 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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