Somelome
people
think
that
the best way to
reduce
crime
is
to give longer
prison
sentences. Others, however, believe
there
are
better
alternative
ways to
reducing
crime : Discuss
both
views
and give your
opinion.
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differing views regarding the
decreasing
the
number of
crimes is a matter of higher prison
sentences.
However, others think that different
strategies
should be utilised and will be more effective.
To begin with,
crime
is a
major
and increasing problem all over the world. If the crime is more serious they give a longer crime sentences. In prison, the criminal makes new friends with other offenders which is hazardous for the society. When criminals who are a threat to society are convicted for long years in jail it would return to peace and harmony back to the society. But there are many dangerous criminal which make misuse of long stay in prison they mix up with other offenders and try to run from there or they even harm others. Some pretend to be a good in prison but coming out from prison they start doing the bad things again and again due to lack of education and moral values. For instance, some offenders pay huge amount of money for their crime and comes out of prison instead of long time in prison.
It can not be deny that there are better
alternative ways for reducing crime. We could also change their mind with some values and relationship despite of longer prison sentences such as providing some training, coaching with good moral values and last but not least, showing them advantages of living like a good man. Also, providing them proper education facilities and employment can solve the issue far more effectively. Furthermore, sufficient education and job opportunities keep them busy and away from the crimes. To cite an example, offenders should be given punishment like clean every public bathroom, sweeping on road reduce the crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2952.0 1615.20841683 183% => OK
No of words: 549.0 315.596192385 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37704918033 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43192115351 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 176.041082164 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510018214936 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.9 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7575942413 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185716284409 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632349431642 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832064173807 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477216022817 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567127204745 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.