Spend money on railways than roads
Many people think that we should invest more budget in railway systems than roads. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this point of view for many reasons.
Although railways can be upgraded to means of public transport, I must admit that roads have their own advantages for their popularity and convenience. First of all, we can observe the significant development of infrastructure in local neighborhood, which is mainly roads. This can be rooted from the real demand from local residents. There are the vast majority of individual vehicles such as cars, motorbikes, and buses which meet most increasing needs of travel. In addition to this, I prefer spending more money on roads for comfort they can bring civilians. Roads can help movement from some places to other areas faster, therefore, authorities should have more projects to improve current facilities related to it.
On the other hand, it will be financial burdens if governments pay more attention to railway improvement. As we know, road renovation requires less money than railways to install and maintenance, maybe at approximately half of budget on railways. Thereby, it can be a huge waste once we spend much money on railway upgrades. Moreover, it is needless to say that railways need higher technology to renovate or build new ones. Hence, there must be hundreds of experienced experts in this industry to participate in projects, especially foreign companies which require a lot of budget for a construction.
In conclusion, I strongly hold the opinion that spending money on roads overshadows railway systems. It can save a lot of money on other social plans and it is also convenient to release stress on current traffic congestion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
...rom local residents. There are the vast majority of individual vehicles such as cars, mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18996415771 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9105840643 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8521584826 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346695028692 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115085846098 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124632281633 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216361565676 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916313931721 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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