In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this ? What can be done about this problem ?
There is no denying the fact that, in the contemporary era, agricultural field raised their standard due to technological advancement. However, most of the individuals still suffer from starvation. In the essay, I will discuss some causes behind this notion along with remedies for dealing with those worrying issue.
To commence with, there are plethora of reasons behind this problem. The predominant is increasing population. In the modern era, proportion of people are ten times increase as compared to past year. Due to this, humans can not get the food. Secondly, nowadays, wastage of cuisine by people which leads to reduction of food. For instance, rich individuals purchase more meal but eat less and throw the remaining food in dustbin. Last but not the least cause is poverty. As, some people can not able to take the cuisines which leads to famishing.
On the other hand, this problem can be easily tackle by following few improtant measures. Primarily, Government should control the birth rate by create awareness among parents about small family norm. For example, educational camp are held in community regarding “Small family happy family". Apart from this, authority should provide the knowledge to persons about do not waste the food because it cause the starvation in our nation. Moreover, officials should give the free food to poor people because they can not afford it. It is the responsibility of government to satisfy their hunger.
To conclude, there are multifarious reasons of starvation such as number of masses increase all over the world, throw the food unnecessary etectera. For reducing this issue officials should take some step.
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26492537313 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72496144984 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3253885966 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2631578947 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1052631579 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19359573095 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545444948576 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532355940192 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104789819177 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031650892221 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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