In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Despite the fact that the development and breathroughs in the agricultural sector, million of people all over the world still suffer from hunger and malnutrition. This essay will discuss several causes and suggest some sollutions to tackle the problems.
There are different reasons to explain for the issue. First and foremost, many people who living in the regions affected by climate change and natural disaster such as prolonged drought, extreme weather event, violent storms and so on causes food shortages and famine. Secondly, the existance of recism has resulted in the growing gap between rich and poor led to ones who living in area where people have difficulty making ends meet and unemployment.
Solutions to combat the issue are presented as below. Early warning systerm should be improved in order to farmers have enough time to prepare victuals for extreme event and take neccessary actions for their crops. Another method is important to send experts and experience scientists in the field of agriculture to run- down area affected by climate change so that they can find more long- term measure to improve food product in these areas. In addition, governments and large organigsations need to introduce new laws and stricter management in order to prevent people from social unequality which is threatening the lives of milion people in the worldwide.
In conclusion, a huge amount of different measurements help people fight the hunger world by the climate change as well as racism, which is taking place in many regions around the globe.
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- The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 67
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools Others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...reathroughs in the agricultural sector, million of people all over the world still suff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19841269841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65398771543 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7091699833 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140363161742 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463352827515 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375153409858 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865821390871 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375243349527 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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