The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that travelling abroad are not necessary due to the advent of Internet, which might well give people insights into life in other parts of the world. I am a fervent opponent of this idea owing to the following reasons.
From a personal perspective, travelling overseas is beneficial on different levels. Firstly, visiting foreign countries offers travelers chances to accumulate firsthand experience. In other words, people will be able to gain exposure to the unique culture, residents and the lifestyle representing the host countries. Furthermore, by having a close contact with many facets of the local life, travelers not only gain an insight into the spiritual life quickly but also create themselves unforgettable memory. Secondly, journeys to other nations have positive implications on individual’s soft skills. For example, people immersing themselves in exploring new horizons will deal with unexpected situations which will lay the foundation for them to accelerate their decision-making process/For example, being surrounded by unfamiliar environments gives people a chance to grow into more worldly and well-rounded individuals. Besides, with a view to acquiring the extraordinary experiences, there are a wide range of essential skills that a person needs to mingle them in their trips such as survival skill, teamwork skill, and the like.
Despite these above arguments, it is undoubted that Internet is also a remarkably available source of information for people to know more about other people’s lives. Apparently, Internet provides people instant, economical access to almost every knowledge known to mankind, which are considered as the advantageous features of this technological breakthrough. As a result, browsing the websites in minutes would give users a myriad of results. However, as I mentioned above, skills and firsthand experience can only be reached by direct exposure to the nations. Therefore, I think the cost incurred to travel physically is worthwhile.
In conclusion, although Internet plays an integral role in delivering information, overseas travelling is regarded as a worthy experience to improve one’s self in reality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64741641337 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15398135927 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641337386018 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4146570169 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.866666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8666666667 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152885243212 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483516611452 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393713171842 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892306434914 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190971412505 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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