In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem.
In my country, Vietnam, where the reputation is gaining as a agricultural nation who exports thousand tons of agricultural products each year, the salvation is still be a noticeable problem. This essay will explain the reason and give some solution to the situation.
First of all, it is state that the main reason comes from the various agent from the generation to the consumption. This means that each agricultural produce before approaches to the consumers, it has to go through several intermediator. During this process, the mediators rise the price of the for the purpose of optimizing their profits. As a result, the rise in price get so high that some needy family cannot afford. On the other hand, eventhough foods are the basic requirement of human, most of the metchandise seemly serve the wealthy people rather the poor. Taking my country as an exemple, while children in the countryside starve everyday, the number of exporting rice increases steadily. It is undeniable that the government takes great responsibility on tackling this problem.
Moving to the solution, the advance of technology and the intervention of the authority will help the country out of this statement. Online selling will bridge the gap between the producing units and the customers. This would be a promising market where both side would be please. Turning to the poor people, it is the government obligation to provide them priority in food supply and also other basic human needs.
In conclusion, many countries struggle with salvation and poverty meanwhile agriculture makes many progress. The selling process and the inequality in the society responsible for this case. Therefore, the authority ought to prioritize the poor and create a flexible market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nam, where the reputation is gaining as a agricultural nation who exports thousan...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ng as a agricultural nation who exports thousand tons of agricultural products each year...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ducts each year, the salvation is still be a noticeable problem. This essay will e...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun intermediator seems to be countable; consider using: 'several intermediators'.
Suggestion: several intermediators
... to the consumers, it has to go through several intermediator. During this process, the mediators ris...
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Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...hile children in the countryside starve everyday, the number of exporting rice increases...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun progress seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much progress', 'a good deal of progress'.
Suggestion: much progress; a good deal of progress
...and poverty meanwhile agriculture makes many progress. The selling process and the inequality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, still, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21985815603 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85652109936 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9031126028 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189033138911 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553354985916 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495708537379 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107996744417 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00246824995636 0.056905535591 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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