In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
In recent years, people have developed a number of useful farming methods and gained knowledge about a variety of agriculture products . As a result, we now have lots of food to eat; however, some people in developing countries continue to suffer and even die from hunger because of the development of agriculture and poverty.
In developing countries, the gap between the rich and the poor is so big that the distribution of food is highly unfair. The rich enjoy delicious meals every day, while the poor do not have enough food to eat. Besides, the poor cannot afford to buy modern equipment for agriculture and they do not have the latest knowledge and skills to cultivate food, not to mention people living in barren areas and places where they usually suffer from climate change. Take Africa for example, most people who live in infertile areas can not grow any plants up. Also, the lack of infrastructure is another big problem as they have problems of irrigation and soil use.
However, these problem s could be tackle d by some solutions. Firstly, the local government can build some useful infrastructure and buy equipment fo r the local s and ensure the agricultural system work s appropriately. Secondly, experts and farmers from developed countries can train local people who are in need of useful skills and knowledge about the plants like how to take good care of them, what kinds of plants are suitable for these areas and so on. Last but not least, we can take advantage of transport by transporting foods from developed countries which are close to the relevant national borders . These solutions may help people around the world to have enough food to eat.
In conclusion, through the aids of governments, experts and transportation, the hunger problem around the world can be dealt with effectively..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98045602606 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74278670286 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6046185416 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127780998248 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531485955925 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435749200931 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938210163894 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469184247065 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.