Store should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no denying in the fact that food is very essential for the human survival. Some people opine that general stores ought to sell local manufacture instead of imported food products from the neighbor countries. I fully agree with this notion to use local food products and discuss about it in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, if one nation imported the food material from international market the they have to also pay high expenses on shipping charges but locally made food items do not add extra shipping charges because it produces in host nation and they includes less taxes as comparetiviely food purchase from internationally. Moreover, if people demands more the food items which is locally manufacture then it will also beneficial to boost the nation economy. For instance, recently prime minister Narinder Modi influenced more and more individual to use " made in india" products to raise the economy and gross domestic products of India.
Moving further, there are many time when the countries banned the food items due to use bad quality food items while producing the eatable. Likewise, china made the artificial rice which is make with the help of stuff therefore if general public eat it then it can cause several hazardous disease which will put mankind health into the trouble.
In conclusion, if government officials put their efforts to promote local made food items then it will helpful in the nation flourishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15481171548 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64368271826 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5953829967 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.888888889 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33691502342 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142701134164 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957472907652 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202054382638 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130545887744 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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