Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common.
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solution can you suggest?
Human are increasingly suffering from sickness as a result of stress. This essay will make an effort to look at the cause of stress related sickness including longer working hours and increased job pressures. This essay will also suggest solution to these problems including improving one's work life balance and diet.
People are working longer hours than even before in addition they have more job pressure. also every one place themselves under this unfavourable condition as a long as the workforce is a competitive domain. For instance, some people aspire to climb the corporate ladder to gain high status and high paying job. This often results in mental and physical suffering because they have to work overtime and take an extra roles which can be stressful.
However, maintaining a good work life balance and improving one's diet are both critical to mitigating stress related illness. Furthermore, people need to realise that if they live only for work they will suffer either mentally or physically and poor diet will further inflame these issue. As an example, many employees burn out from working too much and neglecting friends, family, exercise and hobbies as well as the food they eat. Therefore, to cut work one must include a better ratio of work, rest, dietary sustenance.
To sum up, in today's fast paced world more and more people are becoming ill as a result of stress. This essay discussed how stress is often caused by long working hours and intense workplace pressure. This essay also suggest that the solution to this problem are to manage a better work life balance and to eat a healthier diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...n addition they have more job pressure. also every one place themselves under this u...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...have to work overtime and take an extra roles which can be stressful. However, mai...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... a good work life balance and improving ones diet are both critical to mitigating st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98897058824 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45411778365 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3097570065 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139138063207 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566381422914 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498069196598 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103411331719 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721242397997 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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