Student love is often beautiful and romantic, it becomes colorful memories in student life. Some people believe everyone should experience love during their time in university. However, falling in love doesn’t play an important part when YOU’re in college because it can take YOUR time and money, hurt YOUR emotion and lead YOU to worst decision to YOUR future.
First, being in a relationship will take a lot of time and money, especially when YOU’re Young and YOU enjoy hanging out to interesting places. Instead of studying - the main purpose of a student, when in love, they will spend all the time dating, chatting, hanging out. As a result, many people are faced with the fact that learning is getting worse and worse. When in love students also spend a lot of money on clothes and gifts for anniversary, birthday, Valentine's Day or Christmas Day. It is difficult to properly spend on education and love because their finances mostly depend on parents. That amount time and money can be more effective if it’s invested in themselves and their future.
Moreover, it’s hard to control themselves when they’re not mature enough. Students can make wrong decision that can affect negatively to their bright future. In recent years, many students have committed suicide owing to heartbroken. A research shows that the number of single mothers who are under graduated is increasing rapidly. Decisions, immaturity, not only stop education but also disappoint parents who are believe in their children.
Finally, student love is very fragile. Students have a lot of time to care for their lovers since they don’t have much worries, which makes love beautiful and romantic. Nevertheless,
As a student, YOU have a lot of time to take care of YOUR love because YOU don't have to worry too much about money, work and promotion. That's why YOUR love is so beautiful and romantic. Nevertheless, when students graduate, high pressure, such as, finding a job, getting a higher promotion can break their love. Previous study has reported that 72% of students have broken up with their boyfriend or girlfriend by the last year of college. It’s not necessary to have an easy broken relationship which can create depression.
Inconclusion, falling in love in college bring YOU more disadvantages than advantages. Students should focus on their studying and their future.
Student love is often beautiful and romantic, it becomes colorful memories in student life. Some people believe everyone should experience love during their time in university. However, falling in love doesn’t play an important part when YOU’re in college because it can take YOUR time and money, hurt YOUR emotion and lead YOU to worst decision to YOUR future.
First, being in a relationship will take a lot of time and money, especially when YOU’re Young and YOU enjoy hanging out to interesting places. Instead of studying - the main purpose of a student, when in love, they will spend all the time dating, chatting, hanging out. As a result, many people are faced with the fact that learning is getting worse and worse. When in love students also spend a lot of money on clothes and gifts for anniversary, birthday, Valentine's Day or Christmas Day. It is difficult to properly spend on education and love because their finances mostly depend on parents. That amount time and money can be more effective if it’s invested in themselves and their future.
Moreover, it’s hard to control themselves when they’re not mature enough. Students can make wrong decision that can affect negatively to their bright future. In recent years, many students have committed suicide owing to heartbroken. A research shows that the number of single mothers who are under graduated is increasing rapidly. Decisions, immaturity, not only stop education but also disappoint parents who are believe in their children.
Finally, student love is very fragile. Students have a lot of time to care for their lovers since they don’t have much worries, which makes love beautiful and romantic. Nevertheless,
As a student, YOU have a lot of time to take care of YOUR love because YOU don't have to worry too much about money, work and promotion. That's why YOUR love is so beautiful and romantic. Nevertheless, when students graduate, high pressure, such as, finding a job, getting a higher promotion can break their love. Previous study has reported that 72% of students have broken up with their boyfriend or girlfriend by the last year of college. It’s not necessary to have an easy broken relationship which can create depression.
Inconclusion, falling in love in college bring YOU more disadvantages than advantages. Students should focus on their studying and their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the worst'.
Suggestion: to the worst
...d money, hurt YOUR emotion and lead YOU to worst decision to YOUR future. First, being ...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...committed suicide owing to heartbroken. A research shows that the number of single mothers...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...p education but also disappoint parents who are believe in their children. Finally, st...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...ion but also disappoint parents who are believe in their children. Finally, student lo...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... for their lovers since they don’t have much worries, which makes love beautiful and...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve beautiful and romantic. Nevertheless, As a student, YOU have a lot of time to ...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e to take care of YOUR love because YOU dont have to worry too much about money, wor...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...o much about money, work and promotion. Thats why YOUR love is so beautiful and roman...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12628865979 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66336065866 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1091320946 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4782608696 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474859352984 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137844756334 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112609438748 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27347365298 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167213610569 0.056905535591 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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