Have YOU ever encountered many people who don't choose love? They always make sure that love is something that is far away, and has no influence on them half of the time. These could be the stress they're under in their twenties, while they're still students with big dreams. Although many people agree with me, I believe that love, at any time and at any age, should always love and be loved.
First and foremost, love as a student will serve as a catapult for self-development. If YOU fall in love at this time, YOU will have to accept full responsibility for YOUR actions, which will force YOU to think more critically, maturely, and responsibly. According to a respected international publication, 60% of Young people believe that university is the ideal place to find love.
Second, there's love and social bonds to consider. Ties are essential in today's culture, and dating and falling in love is an excellent way to enhance existing relationships, both now and in the future. When YOU fall in love with someone who is not in YOUR field of study, for example, YOU will learn a lot of new things from them, form new relationships with them, and so on....
Finally, love is a lesson in mental health improvement. There's no doubt that many people believe that love is inconvenient and makes YOU feel like YOU're a prisoner to YOUR emotions. However, this isn't totally accurate. YOU have YOUR own feelings when YOU're born, and love is always a holy thing that YOU can't take away from a human life. Love experiences are always valuable lessons that we must learn in order to develop our emotional wellness. "People rise in love, but they reach unimaginable heights in 'betrayed love.'" according to Hemant Pandey. Whether or not love is lovely, there are always great life lessons to be learned.
For the reasons stated about, college love is always a must for personal growth. Try to open YOUR heart, to receive love, not just between men and women, but also for everyone around YOU, to study hard, and to. Allow the world to become a place of love and joy.
Have YOU ever encountered many people who don't choose love? They always make sure that love is something that is far away, and has no influence on them half of the time. These could be the stress they're under in their twenties, while they're still students with big dreams. Although many people agree with me, I believe that love, at any time and at any age, should always love and be loved.
First and foremost, love as a student will serve as a catapult for self-development. If YOU fall in love at this time, YOU will have to accept full responsibility for YOUR actions, which will force YOU to think more critically, maturely, and responsibly. According to a respected international publication, 60% of Young people believe that university is the ideal place to find love.
Second, there's love and social bonds to consider. Ties are essential in today's culture, and dating and falling in love is an excellent way to enhance existing relationships, both now and in the future. When YOU fall in love with someone who is not in YOUR field of study, for example, YOU will learn a lot of new things from them, form new relationships with them, and so on....
Finally, love is a lesson in mental health improvement. There's no doubt that many people believe that love is inconvenient and makes YOU feel like YOU're a prisoner to YOUR emotions. However, this isn't totally accurate. YOU have YOUR own feelings when YOU're born, and love is always a holy thing that YOU can't take away from a human life. Love experiences are always valuable lessons that we must learn in order to develop our emotional wellness. "People rise in love, but they reach unimaginable heights in 'betrayed love.'" according to Hemant Pandey. Whether or not love is lovely, there are always great life lessons to be learned.
For the reasons stated about, college love is always a must for personal growth. Try to open YOUR heart, to receive love, not just between men and women, but also for everyone around YOU, to study hard, and to. Allow the world to become a place of love and joy.
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- Studying ATC program is a bad decision Until now many people still believe that English language only helps improve English ability soft skills but does not equip specialized knowledge like other majors It is because of this point of view that the English 73
- What are YOUR thoughts on falling in love while in college 80
- In Vietnam some students are now saying that studying ATC program is a bad decision They think that major is not taught as deeply in economic subjects such as other majors like business administration and international business However despite several arg 78
- Should college students fall in love or just stick to studying This has been a controversial issue for a long time Some people argue that students should fall in love while others point out that student love is harmful From my perspective I strongly belie 78
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve YOU ever encountered many people who dont choose love? They always make sure that...
^^^^
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
... of the time. These could be the stress theyre under in their twenties, while theyre s...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...s theyre under in their twenties, while theyre still students with big dreams. Althoug...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...e ideal place to find love. Second, theres love and social bonds to consider. Ties...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
... a lesson in mental health improvement. Theres no doubt that many people believe that ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...risoner to YOUR emotions. However, this isnt totally accurate. YOU have YOUR own fee...
^^^^
Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nd love is always a holy thing that YOU cant take away from a human life. Love exper...
^^^^
Line 7, column 562, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...love.' according to Hemant Pandey. Whether or not love is lovely, there are always great ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73756906077 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56717836341 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582872928177 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8425990377 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406540303418 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126060119266 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116501929685 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229080757713 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176517147571 0.056905535591 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve YOU ever encountered many people who dont choose love? They always make sure that...
^^^^
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
... of the time. These could be the stress theyre under in their twenties, while theyre s...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...s theyre under in their twenties, while theyre still students with big dreams. Althoug...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...e ideal place to find love. Second, theres love and social bonds to consider. Ties...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
... a lesson in mental health improvement. Theres no doubt that many people believe that ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...risoner to YOUR emotions. However, this isnt totally accurate. YOU have YOUR own fee...
^^^^
Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nd love is always a holy thing that YOU cant take away from a human life. Love exper...
^^^^
Line 7, column 562, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...love.' according to Hemant Pandey. Whether or not love is lovely, there are always great ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73756906077 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56717836341 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582872928177 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8425990377 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406540303418 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126060119266 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116501929685 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229080757713 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176517147571 0.056905535591 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.