Students graduate from high school without knowing how to manage their money. What are the causes of this problem and how can it be resolved?
Nowadays, a common concern among high school graduates is that they leave school without any understanding or experience in personal financial management. This essay will discuss a range of causes for this tendency as well as potential solutions to the problem.
To begin with, one of the biggest causes of this problem is that the bulk of high school students live with their parents and are fully reliant on them financially. Most students do not have to work to earn money while in high school, as their parents provide for all their needs. Therefore, they don't gain any understanding about the realities of earning and saving money. Usually, the sole money that students receive is from their parents, and this can typically be within the variety of pocket-money that is given with the intent of spending it. Therefore, adolescents only really find out how to spend money, and not a way to earn, save or manage it wisely.
However, there are a variety of viable solutions to help students deal with this issue. The first solution is that basic money management skills may well be included as a compulsory subject for college kids in their high school years, which might help equip them with the knowledge and skills to manage their own personal finances once they leave school, move out of home and enter employment. The reception of education is the second feasible approach that may be implemented to help curb this problem. Parents must take responsibility to ensure that their children are adequately educated in such matters to make sure their children maintain a successful and independent financial situation after graduating and leaving home. They should teach their children about the value of money, how to spend it wisely, and how to save it, rather than simply giving them money to spend. Parents should also explain to their children why it's important to manage money properly and challenge themselves to start a suitable part-time job while in college. From there, their children will have a tiny income to spend and will be able to gain additional experience for the future.
To summarize, while money management may be a concern for many college graduates, there are several feasible methods available to address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98412698413 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52747839325 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4149007955 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40210819707 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136451526019 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577874511926 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254660050672 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663514731947 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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