Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
Information thru internet are accessible today to students and it believes that libraries are not needed anymore. I disagree that library are not necessary for the students, information provided by reading books cannot replace it.
Even though, browsing online helps the students to gain more knowledge, by searching the details they can easily access the data. In addition, more useful educational resources can search in one click and you can do this wherever you are, and it is believe that no reason for the students to fail in class because everything now is in internet. Owing to this, I cannot accept that library in school are no longer needed. Firstly, Reading books, journals and other educational materials are different from surfing in internet. Most people loved to read books and became their hobby, they give them feeling of happiness and relaxation. Students still need to learn the different section on library, easily for them to looks for the books they need. Secondly, by doing research and school assignment some student are not studying hardly, all information are doing copy paste without reading it, as a result, students still failed during examination.
Finally, another good benefit of having library is that students can see and hold by hand all library resources, such as exploring the old books and its latest edition and knowing the author, maps, almanac, magazines, newspaper, encyclopedia, etch., readers gives more satisfaction reading these. Furthermore, librarians doing a handwork to divide and study all the resources needed in the library.
In conclusion, surfing thru internet helps the students gain accessible information, and library is still required in the school, online knowledge cannot replace books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...can do this wherever you are, and it is believe that no reason for the students to fail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40217391304 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67344169287 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6733054976 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297854421455 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107183267079 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715298732969 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174185509192 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750822932745 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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