Studies imply many teen these days fancy socializing online to meeting one another in person. I think because they don’t have much time to meet outside so they prefer to meet outside so they prefer to meet online.
In my opinion, they don’t like meeting outside instead of meeting online. Because they don’t have much time to see each other, there are many people who have to work regularly and almost don’t have time to rest and relax , making them tired and lazy to go out to meet . Someone, when they are tired. If as a any time, they will also be such. So they choose to meet online which is both better for them and less time consuming outside of the meeting.
I think there are some measures that can be taken so that they can take the time to meet in person instead of online. Almost, everyone can't see each other because of work, personal and they don't have enough time for this. So why not let them have a comfortable space for them to relax and gradually feel more comfortable and connected with the people around them. For example , we can reduce the work for them so they can have more time and we can also go to them and encourage them to connect more with people . Maybe, after hearing the advice, they might have different thoughts. Because when we meet outside, we feel easier to connect, our feelings also increase.
Those are my opinions, I believe that in the future more people will like to meet each other outside.
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: .
...ng them tired and lazy to go out to meet . Someone, when they are tired. If as a a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t . Someone, when they are tired. If as a any time, they will also be such. So th...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...son instead of online. Almost, everyone cant see each other because of work, persona...
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Suggestion: don't
...ther because of work, personal and they dont have enough time for this. So why not l...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...with the people around them. For example , we can reduce the work for them so they...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...courage them to connect more with people . Maybe, after hearing the advice, they m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44444444444 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06874474286 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515555555556 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2280486965 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370635820947 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161876100903 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103801900353 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255210911035 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165643978837 0.056905535591 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.