Lately, there has been a debate about the youngster rather has a online conversation than a real face-to-face meeting, which has a harmful effect on everyone's health. Within the scope of this writing, i will present some main reasons and problaly, some great solutions will be shown in this essay.
To start with,most adolescents are over-using technology. Thus, they will lack real interactions. It is because of developed devices such as phones, laptops,... play an important role in our daily basics that enventually create a passive lifestyle in teenagers. It will cause shyness, worriness when one of them communicate with the other in real life. It is exemplified by Vietnam that most of student don't know how to talk in front of people even though some people are their online and offline friends. It is a warning for those young people out there.
Another noticeable factor is that their schools don't usually host events or activities to help them make friends or bond their relationship. Schools are the most easy way to meet new people and make new contacts. Without this, young people will lose a lot of opportunities and maybe increase their time spend on the Internet which is perilous and should be removed.
It stands for reason that tackling online interactions should be high on any gorvernment's list of priorities. The best way to prevent this is that
school activities must take place daily in order to get student know each other and after that, they can be friends or partner in them studies. This is a best recommend solution for young people
In conclusion, too much socialising online is harmful,we must pay more attention in real life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98214285714 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70968341601 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1410628536 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111405938616 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317864630154 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028413446521 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587095615452 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233275621311 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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