To succeed in a business, one needs to be good at maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that whether businesses that want a lot of interest must have a calculating mind or not remains a source of controversy in the business field. While i accept that maths is important for a business to be successful. I would argue that there are other factors contributing to this success. On the hand to gain the success of a company, one need to be good at maths. When you are good at calculating, you will have a thinking mind, a mindset, judgment. It will help a lot of you in business. And it’s the key to business. Especially for young start up, they should be good at calculation skills because it will help them balance their finances or will help them succeed later
On the other hand some professions do not need to be calculated. However there are many factors that also need to business success. Some factors such as luck know how to seize opportunities, investment, hardwor, leader,reckless. If you have invest, you will combined with partner compaines. Thirdly you have to working hard because only hard work is successful. Finally if you know to lead, you can hire people who are good at math, so it’s not just good math that helps you succed and you can use them to work for your company.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it’s not enough just to know math skills, you have to know math skills, you have to many factors other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ontroversy in the business field. While i accept that maths is important for a bu...
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...finances or will help them succeed later On the other hand some professions do no...
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Suggestion: However,
...ofessions do not need to be calculated. However there are many factors that also need t...
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...portunities, investment, hardwor, leader,reckless. If you have invest, you will combined ...
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...,reckless. If you have invest, you will combined with partner compaines. Thirdly you hav...
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...d because only hard work is successful. Finally if you know to lead, you can hire peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, such as, you know, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54471544715 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64528908927 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0286420334 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8571428571 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333596201079 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108207059037 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836403349972 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219267628741 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744771164554 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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