Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Art is the pride and heritage of every country, giving us insight into the culture and traditions of different nations. However, nowadays, as minimum number of people only appreciates art due to they give more attention to Science, Technology and business. This essay will discuss my opinion that people should focus on art and what could be taken steps to people folks to turn on art.
In my view, one of the problems is these days art lovers are less because they are influenced too much by the development of modern technology and science, they need to know that art brings many benefits to each of us. First, arts give human being opportunity to see things from different perspective. It’s clear that in the world of arts we can use imagination and creativity to see things as the way we want not simply as the way they are. For example, in the world of science a cat is just an animal with soft fur and 4 legs but to the writer’s eyes, it is considered a friend, a hero or even a cultural symbol. In addition, arts instill religious spiritual value to each individual, arts as a source of inspiration evoke happiness and promote creative spirit through many different ways such as music, pictures, movies,.. arouses a awareness of sympathy. Arts help gain deeper in sight into the world we live in and become well-rounded person.
There are a few possible solutions that might help authorities to solve this problem. First of all, governments can support for artists and art organizations and provide more funding to create more opportunities for artistic expression and establish art institutions or museums and adopting digital platforms to appear wider audiences. For instance, there are many events, liveshows music and art museums that attract a large number of people and gain high profits. In addition, school and universities should prioritize arts education and include it in their children's curriculum to help instill an appreciation for the arts in school from an early age.
To conclude, I think in the above-mentioned remedies would be gotten better result and certainly, the public might be turned back to concentrate on craft how following these remedies. I hope this trend is certainly, encourage more public to take interest in arts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94225721785 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78901001979 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9088386496 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6875 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322737172815 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959226389167 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627888364979 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19046855316 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589758073262 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.