To succeed in business, one needs to learn and know math. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Math plays an important roles in many aspects of life. It is suggested that it is fundamental for entrepreneurs to be successful. In my opinion, albeit math can help workers in many ways, other factors should be given attention as their contribution is also vital.
Unagruably, having good command of math gives people many distinct advantages over their competitors. First, there are a wide range of industries which require math skills. Technology, economy, and physics are among those sectors that demand the ability to use math. By possessing the needed quality, individials stand a higher chance of being recruited in organisations. In addition, it is believed that there is a close colleration between math and problem solving skills. People who are good at math have a tendency to make decision quickly and efficiently. This make them standout individuals within their organisation and climb high in the career ladder. From the mangement perspectives, managers who good at math especially statics, can harness their gift to analyze data from their companies or market, and make relevant adjustments to optimize either marketing and production operation, thereby benefiting their workplace or business.
Apart from using math, other skillsets and characteristics are essential to the survival and flourishment of firms. The first skills that is highly valued is the ability to think critically. This allows person to approach issues under different angles, which broadens their view and makes them mote capable of tackling challenges thoroughly. Another necessary subject is managing human. If workers are good at dealing with people, negotiating, or inspiring others, it would be easier for them to work with coleagues and even deploy the human capital in their place of work. Finally, utilization of computers and state-of-the-art technology are of great importance in modern working environment. Advanced computer users can speed up their work and perform their tasks more accurately which leads to increase in productivity. Thus, critical thinking, human management and usage of cutting-edge equipment could help both individuals and companies.
In sum, even math can facilliate the career progession of people and efficiency of economic organisations, other components are also contribute to the development of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
Math plays an important roles in many aspects of life. It is suggeste...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...rganisations, other components are also contribute to the development of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, thus, apart from, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54775280899 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03290017338 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626404494382 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0469739754 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0681314535004 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232858592511 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220299967468 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043494743638 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245561387375 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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