Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own answer.
There are diverging views about whether sports professionals should get higher salaries. While some oppose the idea of there is no reason that athlete should be paid with higher income, the fact should be opposite.
To a certain extent, sports professionals should not have more salaries. Every kind of jobs are equal, and all of them should be treated fairly and be respected. Although someone may say athlete is undertake the most honor of a country, it is their responsibility of being a sports professionals. What is more, it is the same of scientists working in the front lines that help to boost motherland. They sacrifice their own holiday voluntarily to work on researching, and some of them even be hurt by chemicals which are toxic and radioactive. All jobs have a variety of pressures on different aspects. However it seems quite short-sighted because it misunderstands the true situations of athlete.
It is necessary of paying sports professionals with higher income. There are lots of convincible reasons. Athletes usually be trained since they are very young, and they spent most of their youth in gyms or competitions. In addition, they lose many chances to be with families and friends, their childhood is much border and tedious than any other children. For instance, once a famous swimming athlete was interviewed by a host of TV program, and she said because of strict regulations and hard training program, she never experienced happy moment with parents, which made her feel really regret. Besides, their works are of high-risk. Getting hurt is their everyday life, to become a successful sports star or Olympics champion, they have to undertake an account of pain and pressure, from both opponents and society such us harsh comments made by media. In a nutshell, it is important to pay athletes higher salaries. All of these reasons have supported that athletes should earn more than others, because more risks and challenges.
Although the opinion which sports professionals should not earn more sound reasonable, it is not as convincible as reasons from advocators who do think sports professionals should make more money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'undertaken'.
Suggestion: undertaken
...ed. Although someone may say athlete is undertake the most honor of a country, it is thei...
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Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...iety of pressures on different aspects. However it seems quite short-sighted because it...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be usually
...e lots of convincible reasons. Athletes usually be trained since they are very young, and ...
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Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...r everyday life, to become a successful sports star or Olympics champion, they have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, really, so, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1452991453 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87372747345 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566951566952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4881634954 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0526315789 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147281360652 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437343236521 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466474766627 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102687332194 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466091986479 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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