Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professionals. Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sport personals who are successful in their jobs are paid far better than others in different fields.A few individuals believe that this is not right while others think this is acceptable. The reasons why certain individuals support this view is believe sport personals help in bursting the economic of the nation rapidly during competition and also help to promote socialization in the society and while others disagree with this statement is because their sport activity is short lived. In my opinion, i think that it is justifiable for sport experts to earn more than their other counterparts.
On the one hand, it is justifiable if sport men earn more because they help to grow the economic of the nation during competition. Due to the spirit of sport manship, people from different nations will travel down to the country where the game is to take place. Thus, they book hotels, visit restaurants to eat, board the country 's public transportation. All these increase the income revenue of the nation.Example is prominent during the football matches.So at the end , in order to encourage sport personels, the government of such nation pay them more. As they can increase her income within a short period than others that will take a while.
More so, sport experts help the society to be socialized. Because people from various tribes come together and unite to support the sport of their interest. With this, people can build long lasting relationships by going to visit themselves later and they get to know selves better. Furthermore,it gives community members the excitement of going out of their house to the sport stadium. Such is seen when people are stressed and tired but they know that once they get to the sport centre they will see people that will cheer them up.Thus , paying sport experts More salaries help to reduce psychological stress and isolation.
On the other hand , people do believe it is not justifiable to pay sportsmen higher salary than others because, they believe that their services is short lived. It is believe that sport experts can not continue to be actively involved in sport for life. Because their strength and stamina will reduce as they grow older. They have time limit to participate in sport activities. For instance,the world famous football player Austin Jay Jay Okocha retired from playing football at the age of 37 years.while if it is other professions like medicine or teaching , they are just starting to render their services to humanity.As a result, paying them lesser is seen acceptable by others.
In conclusion, i think that it is acceptable to pay sport professionals more salary than others. Because they help to prevent isolation and grow economic of the nation.Nevertheless, other believe it is not wrong as their services are not for longer period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 467.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02997858672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75823880772 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473233404711 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1775245425 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.45 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.35 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268249583417 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094652979649 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756090977587 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165864179097 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636861853305 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.