In today's modern world, sports have become popular then even before. Around the globe, every young people decide to be a great sportsman and become famous person.A popular sportsman earn more money than other important professional. Some people think, it is unfair to other professional. I will discuss both points and come to conclusion.
At the outset, a sport professional practice and work hard to achieve success. It is not surprised that, they earn lote of money because they deserve. Moreover, in this professional, there are no scope of mistakes. For example, in cricket , if a player do miss fielding , leave a ball or catch in a single match then that player throw out of the team. Moreover, some sportsman far from our homes for practice and training. Sometimes they have no time to meet our family or a friend. They obey the strick roles to become their career. Farthermore, some sportsperson earn wages from advertisement and sponser as well.
On the other hand. other professional like a engineers, adoctors, and a teacher. They contribute our nation to run smoothly. A person become a engineers after 8 years study and they invent new things which makes life easier . Similarly, after 10 years study, a person become a doctor, they save the life of human beings. A teacher study to young people to be a responsible citizen. All these professional get less salary than sports professional. If they don't get more in our country then they migrate to developed countries. As a result, our country faces a many problems. They are running our country, so they also get same salary as player.
In conclusion, sports professional should get enormous money because they represent our country. Other professionals also get more salary because they help common man more then sports person does and they providing significant contribution to our country.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 61
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reat sportsman and become famous person.A popular sportsman earn more money than ...
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... work hard to achieve success. It is not surprised that, they earn lote of money ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05194805195 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78062366207 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9151054104 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8333333333 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204069294117 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067299091286 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860316281651 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145712939279 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093868702903 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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