Nowadays, a trend to consume outside food has been increased.No doubt it helps to increase economical benefits, but we can't undervalue regional products. Some people believe that food should not be imported. I firmly believe that this opinion is correct. The supportive reasons for this notion would be described in the upcoming paragraphs.
first and foremost reason is import duty. the food comes from outside imposed with an abundance of taxes i.e. excise duty,goods service tax etc, which made the product more expensive. and it could not be consumed by everyone which also contribute to creating a gap between haves and have-nots. next, the food comes by different modes of transport i.e. by sea, road or air which made the food polluted by poisonous fumes.this can be the cause of serious ailments or chronic diseases. moreover, processed food does not carry any nutrients and vitamins, also cause to grave repercussions.
furthermore, importing products can have bad implications on local culture. if people generate more value to outside food, it would lessen the regional strength. for instance, during COVID-19 the lockdown was imposed and all the trade was halted for a limited time.in the meantime, the only vocal helped to fulfil the local needs. if it does so, people can value and recognise their indigenous products and even promote to the outer world which would help to generate income.
in essence, to strengthen local culture and environmental benefits, one should reduce food imports. if people do join hands with government to create " vocal for local" then it can be accomplished easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: No
...consume outside food has been increased.No doubt it helps to increase economical b...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'graving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26053639847 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71341201751 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.243291066 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121945216572 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437232399155 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300659549668 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069081155789 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251557472659 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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