Longer lifespan’s effects have been a matter of contention. Some people hold firm to the belief that there is an increasing number of old citizens and this is associated with the whole society in general and affect to others age individuals in particular. Such effects require further deliberation.
First and foremost, the lack of human resources is prioritized for discussion. It is widely acknowledged that it is hard for elders to the workforce because they usually have to suffer from physical problems and mental abilities. Although there are many given solutions such as expanded the working-age, it still disadvantages the laboring quality a lot. Furthermore, this also creates opportunities for foreigners to immigrate to other regions and the natives may be overwhelmed in their own countryside.
In the second place, the financial burden is worth contemplating. It is common knowledge that the major income of the senior citizens is the pension which is provided by the government. People living longer means that government has to pay more for expenditure incurred and as a result, public financial resources constantly short. As a case in point, they always receive precedence from society such as supports for hospital fees or modern technologies in nursing homes in developed countries.
Last but not least, making advantages from elderly is of paramount importance. It cannot be denied that the ore longer people live, the more services available for the elderly, and older people are easily seduced so they can be used to make a profit. For instance, in Vietnameses, there was hundreds of news that exposed the tricks to scam money from elders of the evildoer such as convince those senior citizens to pay for using services but then disappeared after getting their money.
All in all, it is considered that the aging population causes some negative effects not only on individuals but also on the whole society. From my perspective, I hold the belief that the consequences of this problem are associated with the context of the entire society. The government ought to thoroughly consider the aforementioned notion to make the right decision.
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 67
- The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 95
- The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013 82
- The flow charts shows the production of cement and concrete 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...disappeared after getting their money. All in all, it is considered that the ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, then, as to, for instance, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, on the whole, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25287356322 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95557117621 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7930665953 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.529411765 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295866879879 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722821155514 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594881814389 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142977982031 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430445107359 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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