Task 2: Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is argued that nowadays many people use alternative medicines and treatments to cure their health problems instead of visiting the doctor as usual. In my opinion, I think that this is a negative development and I believe that people should visit the doctor for their health problems instead of self-medicating
On the one hand, there are several reasons why more people with health issues are experimenting with alternative medications and therapies. Firstly, some people will feel not comfortable and shy when coming to a strange place or they meet face-to-face with doctors to cure their health. For example, my brother is a shy person and he hates visiting the doctor like others, so my parents have to buy some medicines and treatments for him to use alternative. Secondly, the cost of visiting their usual doctor can waste a lot of money, however, buying medicines and treatments to use alternatives can be convenient and save people money. Overall, many people alternative medicines and treatments because they want to save their money and don’t want to come to a strange place or meet strange people.
On the other hand, I believe that people should visit the doctor if they have health issues instead of attempting alternate medications and therapies. To begin with, people can easily use some drugs or treatments that are not good if people are careless. This will be very dangerous and can affect their health a lot. However, if people go directly to the doctor to cure their health problems, this will more safety for people and they can have more good medicines or treatments from the doctor. For instance, my sister has serious health issues and since she visits to doctor, she health has improved more thanks to efficient medicine and treatment from the doctor. Hence, going to the doctor can be better than trying to use alternative medicines or treatments.
In conclusion, although using medicine or therapies can have benefits for people, it seems to me that it will be better if people go to the doctor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9706744868 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67199039739 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439882697947 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7596145404 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.384615385 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370767168515 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163850547937 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885473384069 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267850385651 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131748602851 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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