Task 2: Nowadays, people all over the world are spending more and more time apart from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families?
These days, it is increasingly common for people to spend time for their private lives rather than their families. As far as I am concerned, this practice can be attributed to two rational reasons and it has several adverse impacts on both individuals and their families.
To begin with, there are two radical reasons for this development namely the generation gap and the boom of Internet entertainment. First and foremost, the generation gap is an old-age problem. On account of the age disparity, a deficiency of understanding and sympathy is born, which has the tendency to make persons fall into a closed life. Moreover, many family activities can be inappropriate for their personalities; hence, they are prone to have personal activities. Secondly, the dramatic development of technology is also considered another cause. In the past, families spent time together in various outdoor activities, while nowadays, they are engrossed in an imaginary world with texting and games. For example, children especially juveniles tend to be attached to screens almost all their free time instead of talking with their parents and siblings.
The tendency of private life brings about undesirable effects. In terms of individuals, they are susceptible to emotional problems resulting from the shortage of family communication. Indeed, they have difficulty confiding their troubles and expressing their real emotion to their parents. Additionally, generational communication among parents and offspring might be weakened. Spending much time apart from family can tarnish the basic function of the family is to support and sympathize each other. Thus, family members are subject to gradually drift apart.
In conclusion, the trend of spending less time with families could stem from the generation gap and the advent of new entertainment forms, posing a variety of negative influences on both individuals and their families. Therefore, it seems to me that people should balance their lives to have a suitable amount of time with their families.
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- Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities Other believe that outside of school children should be free to enjoy life Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- causes and effects of Internet addiction 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43533123028 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97997242398 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1877083586 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302557245262 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876767342 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678657828943 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191602434471 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334627472404 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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