In the contemporary world, modern machines development are improved and is used by mostly people worldwide. It is true that technology plays an role in changing the interaction of human in a different way. Personally, I believe that there are some positive impact which human can easily get in these day. The following will explain the sentiment.
As can be clearly seen that nowadays people are taking advantages of technology to boost increasing communication between each other based on the high speed and related information accession. Firstly, It is widely known that everybody keeps in touch with others with more frequency than in the past. Thanking to launching some website and apps such as Facebook, for example, which are installed on the technology and the invested of the internet prompt people chatting with people in just 5 seconds. Secondly, people can also easily update the information of relatives or friends which can help people know more about each other. In some conversations, it is considerably sensitive when my best friends not know more a the recent situations of each other.
Turing to its positive impact, there are two primary benefits which human being can enjoy due to the modern gadget. Technology help reduce the time to contact in all cases. If a person is in emergencies or unexpected situations, he or she will want to call someone immediately. Moreover, it is true that the existence of smart machines can improve the relationship between each other, especially a couple. In other word, a boy can find the some related information so easy that he and his girl friend can continue the story or conservation and the others may feel the caring from him.
In conclusion, technology has changed a lot the way human interacting with others based on the speed and information on social media. On the other hand, these kind of development for society will be positive in some way, I believe that.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dwide. It is true that technology plays an role in changing the interaction of hum...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le in changing the interaction of human in a different way. Personally, I believe that there are s...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...ve impact which human can easily get in these day. The following will explain the sentime...
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Line 2, column 717, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...tive when my best friends not know more a the recent situations of each other. Turin...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...uple. In other word, a boy can find the some related information so easy that he and...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ion on social media. On the other hand, these kind of development for society will be posi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in all cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97832817337 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80119212801 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2730522708 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267709331511 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875052790923 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678831334751 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173562320456 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657494889181 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dwide. It is true that technology plays an role in changing the interaction of hum...
^^
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le in changing the interaction of human in a different way. Personally, I believe that there are s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...ve impact which human can easily get in these day. The following will explain the sentime...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 717, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...tive when my best friends not know more a the recent situations of each other. Turin...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...uple. In other word, a boy can find the some related information so easy that he and...
^^^^
Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ion on social media. On the other hand, these kind of development for society will be posi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in all cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97832817337 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80119212801 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2730522708 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267709331511 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875052790923 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678831334751 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173562320456 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657494889181 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.