Task 2: Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people argue that" job security is not as important as job satisfaction. But some people believe a permanent job is more important". In my opinion, i agree with both of views.
In my point of view, job satisfaction has a lot of benefits for us. When we do a job which we enjoy, we feel very happy and excited. From there, we have the motivation to work harder and better. Moreover, we can work effectively and quickly. According to a recent survey, over 60% of Americans are successful in their job because they choose the right job satisfaction. Besides, security in a job is very necessary. If our job is unsafe, i think we should consider carefully before choosing this job. You know, human life is the most important. What about a permanent job? I think it is a good idea. If we choose a permanent job, we can have a stable salary. The permanent job is usually a safe job, it does not have many difficulties. But it is boring because it does not have new changes. I have a story, my brother is an officer and he worked this job about 10 years since 2013. He had a stable salary but it is not too high. Although he has a stable salary, he does not like this job too much. Because it is not interesting and not his favorite job. Now he wants to change his job but he can't. We can not have motivation and work hard if the job is too boring. Professor, F.H.Johnkin, Havard University, supposed that happiness in a job is the best way to work effectively. After all the points provided, it is easy to see that job satisfaction is more important than job security, and job permanent is more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is more important'. In my opinion, i agree with both of views. In my...
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...s very necessary. If our job is unsafe, i think we should consider carefully befo...
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.... Now he wants to change his job but he cant. We can not have motivation and work ha...
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.... Now he wants to change his job but he cant. We can not have motivation and work ha...
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Suggestion: Johnkin
...f the job is too boring. Professor, F.H.Johnkin, Havard University, supposed that happi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, after all, i think, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40468227425 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76966293301 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505016722408 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5325106969 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.875 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4583333333 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420740445854 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138672678573 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14496340265 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.43597006317 0.151304729494 288% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116360420844 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 13.0946893788 42% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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