Task 2: Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The debate on the importance of sports in our society has never been settled for years. with some people considering them just as a pastime while others emphasize on their crucial impact on human life. There are valid views on both sides, which I will discuss now before declaring a position.
One the one hand, many regard sport activities recreational due to the way they do them. Firstly, they highlight the way sports help to release stress after hard-working weekdays. A soccer match with friends at the weekend, for example, is one of the good choices to alleviate all the pressure from work because the players just want to have fun and do not care about winning. Furthermore, some people choose to play sports with the primary purpose of making new friends and expanding their network. We can see this in the way several join golf clubs where they come to find and discuss promising business opportunities and do not focus on playing.
On the other hand, supporters of sports highlight the way they improve the society as a whole. They point out the improvement of physical and mental health if one plays sports regularly. This not only reduces the likelihood of suffering from diseases, such as obesity or heart trouble, but also results in better work performance with higher productivity. Another merit stemming from doing sport activities frequently is the improved teamwork skills and fighting spirit, which are essential in this competitive world. Several successful people who, in many cases, have played sports since their high school are able to overcome obstacles and stand out in their lives because they possess these critical features.
In conclusion, I feel that while some people can consider sports as a leisure activity as they offer them a way to relax or to serve other personal purposes, these activities in fact greatly benefit individuals and the society in terms of both health and work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ciety has never been settled for years. with some people considering them just as a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01246105919 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55633625677 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8126530918 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.928571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194771329241 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711119874887 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503843955636 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139159709639 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476471671306 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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