Task 2: Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Do you agree or disagree with the view?
In today’s modern era, the question of whether that childcare centers or family members will be better carers for their kids has a great deal of public attraction. Although family members have a closer relationship with their children, I argue that childcare centers are the best carer for children.
Originally, people believed that the best choice for taking care of children is the family; however, this is not true. Firstly, not all family members own good knowledge for bringing up and teaching the children. With the lack of knowledge, parents tend to accidentally transfer the wrong idea or the bad things for their children. Second, caring for family members makes children become dependent on their family when they enjoy the games or initiate the word they received. Consequently, children usually operate in an inactive way.
With the disadvantage of family members, childcare centers are a good option for educating and nourishing children outside the family scope. It provides an environment for the children to meet their friends or the person who is the same age. Through that, children develop a massive number of skills like communication, teamwork. In the future, it will be easier for them to integrate with society. Moreover, almost all childcare centers have good employees who are professional at interacting with children. Therefore, it avoids educating and training the children in the wrong way.
In conclusion, childcare centers provide the best service for children of preschool age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In today’s modern era, the question of whether that childcare centers or family member...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an inactive way" with adverb for "inactive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Consequently, children usually operate in an inactive way. With the disadvantage of family mem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74589339843 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2320953928 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425252460272 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161271235895 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102226324722 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314359823503 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691055036157 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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