Task 2: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that playing team sports provides people with more benefits as opposed to participating in individual sports. In my opinion, I believe that individual sports are a good choice for people than in team sports.
On the one hand, participating in team sports such as football, basketball or volleyball, people can get a number of advantages in these kinds of activity. Firstly, players can develop their interpersonal skill from team sports, like teamwork and communication skills, which not only help players in their day-to-day interactions but also benefit people in their workplace. In addition, joining team sports will make them make friends easily, develop a sense of unity, sportsmanship between the teams when they feel a part of a team.
On the other hand, individual sports also provides a number of benefits for people such as enhance their personal skills, build confidence and self-esteem. For instance, when people play individual sports namely swimming, tennis or weightlifting, they do not have anyone to depend on unlike team sports, they have to fight by themselves to achieve their goals. That makes players have to develop a strong spirit to overcomes any challenges they may face in sport and also in life when they go to work in a company or face problems.
In conclusion, although people choose team sports as the best kind of sports that have many advantages, I strongly believe that individual sports like swimming bring players more benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e swimming bring players more benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24481327801 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81070642207 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547717842324 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.0364889159 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.444444444 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281377022866 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137131461254 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714809664825 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202362929931 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550728565078 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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