Task 2: Today, TV channels provide man's sport show more than women's sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?
Nobody denies the fact that there are more man’s sports shows on TV than these of women. However, we cannot expect any fair amount of time displacing games by both males and females. In real life, gentlemen involving in physical activities are outnumbered.
Boys are born with the instinct lifeblood for intense training while girl tends to be interested in activities which require less energy. From high school to professional competition, people witness plenty of male players taking training courses and compete to win awards. There are also girls in sports games but with fewer volumes and extents. For example, when it comes to football, enthusiasts can call out endless names of famous players such as Ronaldo, Messi, Neymar, Diego Maradona, and so on. All of them are male. Therefore, it is understandable for the imbalance time showing exercises program of man and woman.
If we want to have woman’s sports shows displacing as much as that of man, we must have more members from the womanhood taking up athletics. Do we have such a significant amount of women willing to join the sport filed, or just a minor of them feel excited? Many girls don’t even like watching sports shows. To them, physical programs worth nothing but cooking, designing, and makeup shows. There is no use to raise women’s sport on TV channels unless feminists express higher demand on them.
Equality between males and females has been broadly supported by most citizens all around the world. But we should bring up to mind that this does mean every single aspect have to be fair, including sport. Man and women are born with different characteristics and that their physical development, as well as interests, cannot be the same. Man love adventure and intense training while women like art and handcraft. That is the beauty of the two genders that we should not require 100% equality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9873015873 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55440968099 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6219850073 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6842105263 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32809426258 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912673935703 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108301574712 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196373300844 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753466556373 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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