Nowadays, a people more to spend time traveling than ever before, traveling to another place nowadays is easier and cheaper and shall get a piece of new knowledge about different culture.
Firstly, traveling more easy and more cheaper because a nowadays many a new air transportation corporation give a promo to going to a far destination and more efficient to get a ticket and another hand is more easy to get travel agencies with new technology development, for example, a Lion Air transportation in Indonesia always give a promotion (voucher, packet travel, and discount) to flight to new destination and more easy to get ticket on mobile applications (tiket.com or traveloka.com) and I believe every country a welcome for foreign people.
Traveling to another place shall get a relax and unwind for traveler after spent more time for work hard in the room office, and going to a new destination or another country shall get a new educated about the culture, travel shall know about pluralism. Example, went traveler going to the India country, The majority of India religion is Hindu, Hinduism people don’t eat cow’s meat, and have a difference a social culture, the culture in India is cast of the social system. So traveler knows about different culture and behavior to eating.
In conclusion, traveling is more than ever before because of many promotions from the air transportation corporation and an agency, and more easy to get it, the traveler shall more benefits about culture knowledge. I believe the tourism industry will also benefit greatly from tourism
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...e. Firstly, traveling more easy and more cheaper because a nowadays many a new air trans...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Traveling to another place shall get a relax and unwind for traveler after spent mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86073550604 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471042471042 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.5839127 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.0 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348743629759 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181730833636 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984653690843 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250015659949 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457408728083 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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