Technological developments in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people than recent technological developments have brought.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many believe that the ancient technologies helped improve layman’s life rather than new born advancements have done with it. However, I believe that technologies have always been enhancing people’s life standards, regardless of the time.
Taking anytime over the history, scientific inventions and new technologies were always a game changer for the time. Consequently they influenced and changed human life to a great extent. The historic inventions of telephone, radio and electric bulb can be taken for instance. The day they were invented, it brought a difference to the far imaginations of personal and public communication services and the very concept of lighting up houses and streets to a safe and convenient day-like light. Unarguably, these by gone time technologies and discoveries formed the stepping stones to modern developments and inventions.
However, the growth of technologies of our era has made an enviable progress through the diligent researches and emphases in science and related fields and it still goes on. The proliferating fields such as Artificial Intelligence, space exploration and Information and Communication Technology are, a few of the end products of technological evolution and their scope and influence can neither be evaluated nor predicted in limits. Nevertheless, this fast growth and impact of the new generation innovations are so vast and multitudinous that we frequently fail to realize them in our busy life style. This can be clearly understood by the instance of OS or application updates we receive and install for our smart gadgets in every fortnight or monthly basis.
To conclude, in my opinion inventions and technologies have always been there, making our life easier and better and it is quite irrelevant comparing which era they belong to. What is more important is we should learn to appreciate and contribute to these monumental developments that are significantly changing and improvising our life and the world we live.
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Suggestion: Consequently,
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Suggestion:
... and it still goes on. The proliferating fields such as Artificial Intelligence, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, such as, in my opinion, what is more, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45806451613 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20759374739 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1783800305 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.153846154 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253566806646 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823862331156 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591385557712 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148468165408 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487359330674 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.