Technology is becoming more and more prevalent in the world today Given time technology will completely replace the teachers in the classroom To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

Technology is becoming more and more prevalent in the world today. Given time, technology will completely replace the teachers in the classroom.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, technology plays an important role in our life. It has great impacts on many sectors, especially education. It is thought that teachers will be completely replaced by the technology in the class room. I totally disagree with this statement.

We can not deny the role of teachers in the classroom. It is clear that technology may help students with many works but it still has limitation. Firstly, technology can not educate people as effectively as humans do because it can not express emotion, personal experiences or explain clearly the practical context of the lectures. For exmaple, students attending a language class may feel confused when they catch a word they knew in a strange context. A computer or even a robot can not explain apparently this situation for students. However, technology are expected to carry out this task in the future.

Secondly, technology can not manage the whole classroom. Teachers often motivate and discipline students in the classroom or during the learning process. There are many students who are disobeyed or even cheating during the exam, for instant, cameras can observe this but they can not punish or treat those students in a right way. Only teachers can do this. Finally, working with only technology countributes to the lack of social skills such as communication. For example, a computer can provide students with much information but it can not have any real conversation with students.

In conclusion, there are some advanges when we totally using technology in the classroom. The role of teachers in the classroom can not be replaced by any other things. I reaffirm that I totally disagree that technology can completely replace the teachers in the classroom.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... can not punish or treat those students in a right way. Only teachers can do this. Finally, wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22419928826 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85418127142 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519572953737 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.279769535 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2631578947 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252856567598 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103837605696 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078558859811 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191728754399 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611146801917 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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