More attention should be paid on how to discover skilled people from televised talent shows at present time. Needless to say, these shows are just entertainment. However, I certainly believe that these programs are brilliant ideas to find talented people.
It is a well-known fact that many individuals have some extraordinary capabilities which catch viewers' eyes throughout the world. For instance, Googoosh music academy which call "Stage" nowadays, great fantastic atmosphere in talent program, during which people enjoy watching competitors. In this contest, someone loses, this is a normal in competition, however, they memorize of taking part.
Furthermore, this can be considered as the best way to flourish the natural abilities. This meant that organizer find skilled people who usually are selected though hard filters. Then, among lots of applicants, just few people accept for exhibition. Also, it is extremely expensive for people who attend in this performance. However, this show is often rated by 3 or 4 judges who assess the whole criteria and select the best individual due to highest score achieved. As a result, this program make them famous.
This is undeniable fact that many of programs run because of making too much money. For example, we have a show on television in my country and many sponsors support it by appearing advertisement wherever possible to show. Subsequently, its producer get richer by one.
For the reasons mentioned above, talent show helps to find real talent and opportunity for normal people as well as a good entertainment. Beside, It gives motivation to improve skill, confidence and courage to face life. Hence, not only this program provides benefits for participants, but also for its watcher and producer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the highest'.
Suggestion: to the highest
...eria and select the best individual due to highest score achieved. As a result, this progr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38709677419 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95465314476 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663082437276 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3218247522 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25687585521 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777176298437 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952039216592 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157177791446 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105446528193 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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