There are different types of music in world today. Why do we need music? Is traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In this fast moving world everyone is busy doing their work and are very stressed and exhausted. Thus, the humans now has to find ways be stressfree and music has always been a first priority. In ancient ages also the music has served its role as a pain reliever rather than just entertainment. Music acts as a best medicine. Music makes listeners energetic.
But, there is always a dilemma whether one should listen a traditional music or an International music? For an answer to this there has been many serveys and the result of it shows that the international music was more popular amoung the young listeners while the elder ones had penchant for the traditional music. From my point of view both music has its own importance and hence they cannot be separated.
Traditional music of any country reflects the culture of country in its music and makes the listener proud bringing the glorious memory of the past. We provide a n insight of the country's culture. Nowaday the international music is gaining a lot of popularity over the traditional music, the fact is that the people loves to listen new and different things and international music serves this purpose.
No music either the traditional or International is important there is no scale to compare these music because the type of music people depends on the Moods and liking of the listener and everyone is not same and so they have different taste and liking. But from my point of you it is very difficult to predict with music is important because both have a significant role to play in the life of the listeners. But I am more attracted towards the traditional music as it is more related to the culture in which we are brought up.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ne. Music makes listeners energetic. But, there is always a dilemma whether o...
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...ternational music serves this purpose. No music either the ...
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... important there is no scale to compare these music because the type of music people depend...
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...he culture in which we are brought up.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227129337539 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.15141955836 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1261829653 0.0946595960268 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441640378549 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0473186119874 0.0437548338989 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110410094637 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0252365930599 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66246784494 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220820189274 0.0326793684256 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00315457413249 0.00163938923432 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.135646687697 0.0861772015684 157% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00630914826498 0.021408717616 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00315457413249 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1773.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92976588629 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294314381271 0.374742101984 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217391304348 0.28420135186 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14381270903 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100334448161 0.137316102897 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66246784494 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.56093040696 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.254050113 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3571428571 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8709865653 49.517814964 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.642857143 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 43.0962732919 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.49350649351 1.69124875643 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515688069004 0.332605444948 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148743682049 0.102741220458 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101272390202 0.0668466124924 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564469409138 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179932394293 0.148594505496 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22420823128 0.134430193775 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099093252868 0.0742795772207 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.472386544015 0.324371583561 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112611275212 0.0638462369009 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374866573536 0.228012699653 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777696681779 0.058150111329 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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