The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given diagram depicts the information about the Australian Bureau of Meteorology produces reliable forecast by collecting minute information on the weather.
In order to produce reliable forecast the whole process is divided into four stages that is Incoming Information, Analysis and Forecasting, Preparing the Broadcast and Delivering the Broadcast.The incoming information is received through the satellite, radars, and drifting buoy. These data from this receivers is analysed by the satellite photos, radar screens and the synoptic charts which are an important part of the analysis and forecasting.
The analysed information is then passed to the computer which prepares for the necessary broadcast. The broadcasting of this minute information on the weather is done by the TV newsreaders, radios and record announcement.
Thus, the diagram insights that the reason for the up to time information on the weather by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology is the co-ordination among the various stages of the reliable weather forecasting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ars, and drifting buoy. These data from this receivers is analysed by the satellite ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es of the reliable weather forecasting.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.331360946746 0.268076937826 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.136094674556 0.116061578633 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0650887573964 0.0759168565197 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0177514792899 0.0366838410393 48% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.12426035503 0.155750635184 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0650887573964 0.0379272487307 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.17034977341 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0177514792899 0.0210936926555 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.171597633136 0.0948980150116 181% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177514792899 0.00967000014798 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1059.0 1161.00487805 91% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.78846153846 5.90752243213 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.467948717949 0.337110787985 139% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.397435897436 0.247514529752 161% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.307692307692 0.171178102325 180% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.185897435897 0.112407865282 165% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17034977341 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 45.3003149041 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.325275705 42.9750493124 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.5 135.714022679 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.0094962315 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 65.7435897436 47.7609492067 138% => OK
Elegance: 3.38461538462 2.94281807926 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55843664742 0.418131533498 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.269184430204 0.181151798455 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0634127916078 0.0850326197045 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.868136819654 0.706616315825 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101570065798 0.157042692854 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.382614946797 0.228904883108 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129694383235 0.108899403657 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.506495005708 0.367819155151 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10766038184 0.0812612215331 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.461255254537 0.316326947829 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948335280258 0.0921553760075 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.