There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
It has become hard to imagine life without music. Many people compare the importance of traditional music and international music in terms of people’s preferences to listen. In this essay, the role and significance of music will be examined below.
First of all, music is the most convenient method for take mind off things. In fact, nowadays it is easy to get stressed and exhausted due to a number of things, including, air pollution, daily concerns, problems related to work and family and so on. The best way to take a brief unwinding is to listen some of the favorite music which donates more energy, high spirits and motivation.
Secondly, music is classified into certain categories such as traditional music and international music. Some kinds of individuals prefer to listen either of them or both as it depends on their taste upon music and mood. Therefore, it is not essential to choose one of them as the main aim of listening to music is to get pleasure, entertainment and inspiration.
Furthermore from that, the preference of some senior people is to choose only the traditional music which is noticeably memorable for them and they consider this sort of music is much more significant than the international music which is not much understandable and meaningful in their thought. In fact, the correlation between them is not much weighty and catching the meaning as well. The momentous matter is what type of music can break the monotony of life and inspires us to do something efficient. Hence, both types of music are equally important.
Having investigated all aspects, it appears me that the music is magic abstract entity which alters our temper in a second and makes our favorite atmosphere. Thus, there is no importance between folk music and global music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... to take a brief unwinding is to listen some of the favorite music which donates more energ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...easure, entertainment and inspiration. Furthermore from that, the preference of some senio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact, sort of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98996655518 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88023757765 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.007184755 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445677635109 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169139245485 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104902888455 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265247445782 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069596789038 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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