There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
There is an avalanche of music genres for various tastes of individuals from different backgrounds in today's globalized world. There seem to be three main reasons for which we need music, and it is believed that the local music of a country is much more valuable than the international music.
Perhaps the main reason is that music acts as a powerful social glue. This is because music can increase our sense of community and prosocial behavior, resulting in social cohesion and greater positive emotions. Take Jazz as a well-known example that how it brought people together who had different political ideologies in the USA in the 1970s. Furthermore, we need music as it can help develop our intellectual capabilities and enhance our mood. For example, ranging from singing a lullaby to a baby to playing musical instruments can make a considerable contribution to the advanced cognitive and emotional abilities of the baby and musician. More importantly, through the course of history, human beings, whether troglodytes or modern man, has always employed music as a means of communication, making it a special language.
It is true that international music in today's world when there are no boundaries among countries considered being important as a tool to unite black and white people as well as wealthy and impoverished people, whereas traditional music represents a nation's cultural heritage, which is vital to identify the history of the nation and its citizens, and then should be taken much more serious. In fact, music is one of the main parts of a county's culture like language, so without it, we would have an incomplete picture of the country's identity. This is because traditional forms of music contain the myth, story, and destiny of a group or an ethnicity, by studying it, scientists can collate valuable information.
In conclusion, I believe that local music as representing a nation's culture is of great importance, and we need music itself as has been used for communication and alliance since the dawn of humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14925373134 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96143475189 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1646608051 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.75 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454436532976 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167264715904 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101136653229 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298702855406 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933402111349 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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